Tuesday, March 04, 2008

Oh squiggly line in my eye

Oh squiggly line in my eye fluid.
I see you lurking there on the periphery of my vision.
But when I try to look at you, you scurry away.
Are you shy, squiggly line?
Why only when I ignore you, do you return to the center of my eye?
Oh, squiggly line,
it's alright, you are forgiven.

5 comments:

chander said...

he he...made me smile!!...had lotsa fun following it around wen i was small....btw...im commenting for d first...gr8 blog!!..loved ur nostalgic posts....:)

Suvarna said...

I continue reading this blog,loving every post here.(errrrm..maybe excluding the cricket posts,definitely)Cos i dont see no cricket much.Just the final news stuff on tv for me.
But then...i'm patiently looking forward for some out and out humourous posts...
And i must say...you're much better than Chetan Bhagat.Not that am comparing.But dunno why u dont write books!But ...whatever...WAY TO GO!
More power to your writing!
Awesome blog! :)

Hawkeye said...

chander,

thanks. ya i've once spent close to an hour following it.

suvarna,

:-). I have gotten many requests to stop with cricket. I never wrote about it during the early few years of the blog. i am planning to ditch writing about it.

Thanks for your kind words.

rads said...

hehe, it's called a Floater - purely ophthalmological terms :)

Suvarna said...

uh-oh. Didn't mean it that way.Was only musing about the old posts that i remember without actually having to browse thru the archives- Women drivers,the issue on their nighties,your dad,Trisha's stomach,the instance of a helmet in a temple etc , and wished to read something like those.
But mainly wondered about you writing books.Nevertheless,i shall patiently wait for your first book some day!:D