Tuesday, March 04, 2008

Oh squiggly line in my eye

Oh squiggly line in my eye fluid.
I see you lurking there on the periphery of my vision.
But when I try to look at you, you scurry away.
Are you shy, squiggly line?
Why only when I ignore you, do you return to the center of my eye?
Oh, squiggly line,
it's alright, you are forgiven.


chander said...

he he...made me smile!!...had lotsa fun following it around wen i was small....btw...im commenting for d first...gr8 blog!!..loved ur nostalgic posts....:)

Suvarna said...

I continue reading this blog,loving every post here.(errrrm..maybe excluding the cricket posts,definitely)Cos i dont see no cricket much.Just the final news stuff on tv for me.
But then...i'm patiently looking forward for some out and out humourous posts...
And i must say...you're much better than Chetan Bhagat.Not that am comparing.But dunno why u dont write books!But ...whatever...WAY TO GO!
More power to your writing!
Awesome blog! :)

Hawkeye said...


thanks. ya i've once spent close to an hour following it.


:-). I have gotten many requests to stop with cricket. I never wrote about it during the early few years of the blog. i am planning to ditch writing about it.

Thanks for your kind words.

rads said...

hehe, it's called a Floater - purely ophthalmological terms :)

Suvarna said...

uh-oh. Didn't mean it that way.Was only musing about the old posts that i remember without actually having to browse thru the archives- Women drivers,the issue on their nighties,your dad,Trisha's stomach,the instance of a helmet in a temple etc , and wished to read something like those.
But mainly wondered about you writing books.Nevertheless,i shall patiently wait for your first book some day!:D